Liquor on my lips
Wine...
Fills the time
Meaningless nights
Gaps
Voices
Tell the story
Stabbing – jabbing
Pushing – pulling
Reminding me...
Stop it!
Stop it!
Stop the voices
The noises
The song of hate
The lying words
Hurt me
Trash me
Lash out at me
When will it end?
I feel lost
I feel alone
Seems to be the theme
The sad song
Sung for so long
I am the song
The anthem of despair
Floating
In the night sky
Like smoke in the air
Looking, longing
Wondering, waiting
For tender time
Love time
All the time…
Singing
A strange song
A painful song
A heartbreak tune
At the full height of the moon
Turn…
My eyes to the sky
Wipe my tears
Lights out
Good-bye
© 2009 JB. All rights reserved.
Wine...
Fills the time
Meaningless nights
Gaps
Voices
Tell the story
Stabbing – jabbing
Pushing – pulling
Reminding me...
Stop it!
Stop it!
Stop the voices
The noises
The song of hate
The lying words
Hurt me
Trash me
Lash out at me
When will it end?
I feel lost
I feel alone
Seems to be the theme
The sad song
Sung for so long
I am the song
The anthem of despair
Floating
In the night sky
Like smoke in the air
Looking, longing
Wondering, waiting
For tender time
Love time
All the time…
Singing
A strange song
A painful song
A heartbreak tune
At the full height of the moon
Turn…
My eyes to the sky
Wipe my tears
Lights out
Good-bye
© 2009 JB. All rights reserved.
Firstly I'd like to say THANK YOU for picking me as your blog of the week, I'm totally humbled because I think you ROCK! Mwah, mwah! Thrilled to bits - you made my day. Or week, rather! More mwah, mwah.
ReplyDeleteAs for 'Sing the Song' - love it! And to repeat myself: you rock!!
Anna
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Sounds kind of dark and sad :(
ReplyDeleteIts sooo deeep and abstract..yet I could make out the sad tone to it!!
ReplyDeleteI gotta call you!!!
If the see were made of whiskey and I were a duck, I'd swim to the bottom and never come up.
ReplyDeleteHun... like the very first time I crossed my path with yours... here is another of your "thoughts" that completly mirror mines right now...
ReplyDeleteIt is like you say... like you show it... We've known the lght but know we see it dark... "Lights out".
Much, much Love,
Very deep and I loved it!
ReplyDeletehahaha, nice :D
ReplyDeletethis all feels very familiar. you've just expressed it exceptionally well!
ReplyDelete@Anna...your very welcome and you rock. Enjoy your week on my blog. I hope you pick up some new followers or my super great followers. I love your blog and You Rock on sister.....yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!
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@Julie...yeah, it's dark and sad, but I was in a pretty good mood when I wrote it. I don't know, where it came from, but it just came. Thanks for dropping by Julie,it's nice to see you.
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Indi...lolol call me..lolol that's the funniest comment. You just made me laugh out loud. Hey, how's the service business my lovely hahaha?
ReplyDeleteIt's sad like me Indi and abstract like me hahaha. I'm happy you liked it.
Love Ya
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@JP
ReplyDeleteRoses are red
Violets are blue
Holy crap.....
I f**king love you.
Cheers
JB
@izzie...thanks my lovely.
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@Stef....thanks, it's nice that you always come by. I'm happy you liked the poem.
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@Lazy....thanks happy you enjoyed my poem.
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@Shadow...your comment means alot to me. I'm happy you liked it. Thank-you for always coming by and reading.
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I can't stop reading it. It's fantastic.
ReplyDeleteSo ARE YOU!
<3 you love bug.
About the movie in my blogue... I'm discussing the last line in the Movie "My Blueberry Nights" with Jude Law and Norah Jones, 2007 I think...
ReplyDeleteIt's a great movie about self discovery and crossed paths... try to watch it... :)
I hope you like it!
Love,
JB, this is very lyrical. I love it, I love how it flows and almost rhymes but not to the point of monotony. This is stunning, melancholic but beautiful at the same time.
ReplyDeleteHang in there, we're always here to support you x
I like it, a lot, and am sending you a hug. It's sad, yes, but very well done.
ReplyDeleteYou are an incredibly talented writer. Love that poem: the flow, the musicality of the lyrics, the dark and light tones inter mixed.
ReplyDeleteI'm so happy I found your blog.
@amanda...I hope your having a great week-end with yur BFF. I'm happy you like the poem. You can come by and read it as many times as you want.
ReplyDeleteLove Ya
JBxo
@izzie....thanks for the movie title. I'm going to find it and watch it this week-end. Have a nice week-end izzie.
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@katie....I wrote this poem, while I was watching Dancing with the Stars...yeah, I know that sounds insane. The show had nothing to do with it, but the thoughts came at that moment. I would like to add I hate that show a lot. I was watching it with my mother that night...ahhh....
ReplyDeleteAnother thing, the poem was edited by my cousin, who helps me with my blog. She helped me rework it. I owe her for making me look so good and I couldn't do it without her. I need to give credit, where credit is due and she is owed.....thanks cuzzzzzzzzz....!!!!
Every good writer, has a great editor and she is my rock star on this front. To be truly honest, I'm not a good writer, it's she, that makes me look good. I'm a story teller and she is the editor, who makes my stories come to life and I love her for that. She also tells me, that I have a love of comma's and that I should stop using them lolol....haha it cracks me up.
I really like this poem too. I kind of found a new flow with words that I never really used before. I know where this poem comes from but it's the song that it sung to me when I started to pen it on paper. I start all my poems on paper.
Love and Huggs
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Hey check your in box.....lol.
@gran... it means a lot to me to know that my poems don't scare people off. The hugggssss are great. Have a nice week-end. If you watch any good moives make sure you tell us all about them.
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@LLnL.....I'm happy you found my blog. If you read my comments to katieleigh, my writing comes together thanks to my cousin.
ReplyDeleteThe poem didn't change but it was just reworked so that it flowed and I guess it worked out.
By the way I also really like your blog. Thanks for dropping by.
Huggs
JBxo
*hugs*
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-Gina
@Gina...huggs alot to you too. I hope your doing good. I will drop by to see you soon.
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